Dawn

Hi ! Sorry it took so long for me to take a look at your game again. Lots of IRL stuff happened after GMTK :'). Alright ! let's get to the review.

Changing the camera into first person is a really good change imo. It solves the previous camera problems and makes the environment and puzzles more immersive. The player is also a lot easier to control. The pipes in the last level look a little weird due to transparency, but it's a minor problem and the pros definitely outweigh the cons. The starting dialogue, ball ammo UI, and ending are also great additions ! Lovely trees and environment in the ending btw ^-^

Next, i still did encounter a bug. When throwing the ball, it sometimes goes straight up instead of forward. I think the ball throw is also a little too far for first person view. Also, in the pipe level i accidentally fell in an opening near the level entrance, specifically the one on the right edge when entering, and i couldn't jump back up. So, you may want to look out for other "soft lock" areas like that.

Overall, the update is really good and greatly improves from the jam version. Awesome job !

I’m really proud of you for creating your game! Let’s hang out soon and maybe test it together. It’ll be a fun break for both of us.

See you soon! 🌟

Cool first game guys ! Love the graphics, audio, and mechanic